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    August 06

    旋旋的初级作文

    今天回家无聊,拿出旋旋放在我这里的,他第一年上法语课的笔记翻翻。

    首先就看到一个练习。用通俗的话翻译,就是《写一个我最熟悉的人》。他很乖乖的,写了我(我没有强迫他啊!这个是课堂作业!)~~以下是原文以及我的点评~~

    Je voudrais vous présenter Ariel (我的法文名啦),

    ma petite amie. Nous nous sommes rencontrés dans l'université de Wuhan (事实上不是在武汉大学认识的,不过要描述清楚那个台湾交流的项目的确比较难,就骗个人吧~~).

    Elle est très charmante(恩没错没错~).

    Elle a les cheveux longs et noirs(传说中乌黑靓丽的长发~~).

    Comme moi, elle est très intelligente et optimiste(这个孩子,顺便表扬一下自己~~),

    mais elle est un peu timide(这个也是事实。。。外表啦~).

    Après quelques jours nous nous connaissions mieux. Je trouve qu'elle est aimable et intéressante(没错没错~).

    Elle aime beaucoup de choses comme moi. Nous nous complétons parfaitement(我们都到完美结合的程度了~~哈哈,不知道阅卷老师怎么想的~~).

    Je pense qu'elle est la plus jolie(总觉得少了点什么~~la plus belle比较好吧~~而且要加上du monde!) .

    真的是很可爱的作文!:)

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    Yiyao Wuwrote:
    so sweet! 那么“comme mois" 实在很传神,哈哈:)
    我庆幸的是我看懂了!看来还没全忘记~Tres Bien!
    Oct. 5

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